Tuesday, 3 September 2019
Rippa Rugby
On Sunday the rippa team drove to Waitohu school. once we got to school my coach he gave us the clothes for rippa then we played some touch on the caught. Then the bus was here there was 2 teams. on the bus i was sitting with Taipua. once we got there we went to are room and there was bunk beds.At night time are bed time was 9,0 clock. And we were aloud on the chrome books and then we went to bed the end.
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Hi it's cool that you got to sleep there but the punctuation is a little bit bad so I'd fix that. Otherwise good job!
ReplyDeleteHi Zahrn, your one is good. But I would put more punctuation in. Still good!
ReplyDeleteKia Orana Zahrn Awesome Job just check your capitals leatters and fullstops. Overall, great job!
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