Tuesday, 15 October 2019

My Holidays!

In the holidays my family came down from the south island. When they came up i was at the Morai. And then me and Teahi,Tyrone,Tapari,Isaac,and Tapari,s friend went to the pools Then my mum brought me home and they were all so excited.




When I got home my uncle gave me some games for the PlayStation. then me and my cousins wen,t out side and played on the tramp. After that a got crash bandicoot and I earnt  some trophies.


And then on Thursday they left and then me and my mum started to clean up.  Then i went on crash bandicoot and earnt some trophies. 

 

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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous15 October 2019 at 11:47

    Hi Zahrn Your Writing is awesome. you also need to check your punction

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  2. Anonymous15 October 2019 at 12:15

    hi Zahrn

    Good job on earning trophys on crash bandicoot. I play all the time Although I only earnt a few trophys. you must of had fun in the holidays

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