As I sat on the comfy grey chair, I saw important teachers passing by. There were kids in the office annoying the teachers. Matua andy’s leadership cloak was hanging on the wall. The feathers were bright and I was surprised at how colourful it was.
Checking my watch, I saw that it was almost lunch time.
I was pleased because I was hungry. I was looking forward to eating. I was hanging out with Locke at lunch.
That is an amazing description Zahrn. You did so well to make it interesting even if the place you were in wasn't. That is what good writers do!
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